Saturday, August 27, 2011

Another Stinking Ad

A Pampers diaper commercial shows cute babies in various play activities.  The voice says, "Every baby plays by his own rules..."  (so far, so good...)  "...and they need a diaper that lets them do it."
Ouch! Why did the writer start out well, using correct noun/pronoun agreement (the singular baby + his), but then blow it by throwing plural pronouns in there?  (they and them, but still referring to the singular "baby").  How do ad writers get away with this?

I railed against the mixed-pronoun iPad ad.  It disappeared, and was replaced by one that doesn't offend the grammar-sensitive.  I hope this painful Pampers ad is recalled, as well.